With regards to our first draft with received peer feedback in which we would use to improve our piece so it was to a final piece standard.
Below our some examples of our peer feedback:
Below our some examples of our peer feedback:
As seen in our peer feedback, some of our main issues was sound, shot transitions and effects and editing. The first thing we looked at was the sound within our film opening; one issue was the film institution of Universal Studios cutting our early. We decided to improve this by deleting it and reinstalling it to make sure the whole of the music track played. We also looked over all our sounds as our non-digetic and digetic sound wasn't flowing with the music in the background. To improve this fault, we turned down the music in the background. To improve the sound further, we looked at the sound effects to Millies heeled boots and made sure it was more visible by turning it up and tuning it.
With regards to sound, we looked at the voiceover of Millie in the first scene where the script is "Get Here Now!". We looked at making sure it was in sync with her mouth movements within the video.
With regards to sound, we looked at the voiceover of Millie in the first scene where the script is "Get Here Now!". We looked at making sure it was in sync with her mouth movements within the video.
To make our film opening even better we next looked over our scenes to see if they were all running smoothly and made sure they all flowed swiftly into the next scene. We also looked at the effects and made sure they were appropriate for the genre and target audience.
On the other hand, we did recieve some good feedback; our peers enjoyed the variety of shots, the titles text, the genre was apparent to the audience, etc.
